tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1401992135546499971.post5722627000714331026..comments2023-12-02T00:34:43.957-08:00Comments on ... Khayal : My Words...: TheyViditihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15755018963040606660noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1401992135546499971.post-84467153139201820562014-01-27T10:06:25.404-08:002014-01-27T10:06:25.404-08:00Thanks a lot :)Thanks a lot :)Viditihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15755018963040606660noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1401992135546499971.post-38238615337149917062014-01-26T04:36:52.593-08:002014-01-26T04:36:52.593-08:00Well written :)Well written :)M S Mahawarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13071556991609778021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1401992135546499971.post-40439438144529406902014-01-07T01:06:20.569-08:002014-01-07T01:06:20.569-08:00Thank you, ma'am .Thank you, ma'am .Viditihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15755018963040606660noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1401992135546499971.post-10492588901973625172014-01-07T00:43:34.618-08:002014-01-07T00:43:34.618-08:00Nice lines, Viditi! Much maturity & meaning in...Nice lines, Viditi! Much maturity & meaning in those touching words... Keep it up!Anita Sabathttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13365472694082398017noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1401992135546499971.post-47153131098285786232014-01-06T10:26:29.126-08:002014-01-06T10:26:29.126-08:00Look around yourself...you will surely find enough...Look around yourself...you will surely find enough corroborations ! <br />Satyavirhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11811774418195211337noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1401992135546499971.post-13897710422330966532014-01-06T03:28:39.789-08:002014-01-06T03:28:39.789-08:00umm. i don't know that.
anyways thank you :)umm. i don't know that.<br />anyways thank you :)Viditihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15755018963040606660noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1401992135546499971.post-2127991349264357292014-01-06T03:27:11.110-08:002014-01-06T03:27:11.110-08:00Thanks.Thanks.Viditihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15755018963040606660noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1401992135546499971.post-74695138036450500402014-01-04T11:21:28.565-08:002014-01-04T11:21:28.565-08:00This "Tenderness" in relationships is be...This "Tenderness" in relationships is becoming an extinct affair !<br />Manipulation taking over.....<br />Anyways, Short is always Sweet ! (Y)<br /><br /><br /><br /><br />Satyavirhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11811774418195211337noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1401992135546499971.post-59860682049927848082014-01-03T07:31:54.606-08:002014-01-03T07:31:54.606-08:00So Beutiful <3So Beutiful <3ITS PRALAYhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06531550244331530233noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1401992135546499971.post-21924087014854681942014-01-02T04:22:16.760-08:002014-01-02T04:22:16.760-08:00yeah! May be. quite possible. :Pyeah! May be. quite possible. :PViditihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15755018963040606660noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1401992135546499971.post-76934898508504525122014-01-01T23:31:07.503-08:002014-01-01T23:31:07.503-08:00and you know what might have happened next?? A Ram...and you know what might have happened next?? A Ram-Leela / Ishakzaade Kinda ending.. Both embrace and shoot each other...! And then the Dhoom 3 concluding poem 'Bandhe hain hum uske' would have started humming in the environment! Ganeshan L Iyerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09667703229257250432noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1401992135546499971.post-10780652602834346482014-01-01T22:36:52.931-08:002014-01-01T22:36:52.931-08:00It may depict beginning, journey or end of love.It may depict beginning, journey or end of love.Viditihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15755018963040606660noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1401992135546499971.post-27785437976850868582014-01-01T22:35:40.822-08:002014-01-01T22:35:40.822-08:00Thank you so much for the typos.
I have updated t...Thank you so much for the typos. <br />I have updated them.<br />Thanks for such reading :)Viditihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15755018963040606660noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1401992135546499971.post-83015373600335625612014-01-01T20:15:22.822-08:002014-01-01T20:15:22.822-08:001. the words 'his smell' should have been ...1. the words 'his smell' should have been avoided.<br />2. "she didn't shower any **response**<br />3. "stood **beside** her<br />4. "made her eyes dedicated" should have been ideally substituted by "dedicated her eyes" because both are in 'direct speech' and the former certainly doesn't go down well with the tempo of the poem<br /><br />Ganeshan L Iyerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09667703229257250432noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1401992135546499971.post-37019873508007900432014-01-01T20:06:44.192-08:002014-01-01T20:06:44.192-08:00...these lines ...indicates ...the begning of love......these lines ...indicates ...the begning of love.Nitish Tiwaryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06484230743667707116noreply@blogger.com